Each week I send an email to customers, clients and suspects with a selection of new commercial/investment listings that come into my mailbox. I say “selection” because there is a one-line synopsis of 150-200 listings, but it is just a portion of what I receive. The properties I select either represent what is new on the market, or may appeal to certain people on my email list.
When I get the listings I see graphically the shortcomings that otherwise excellent real estate practitioners make in their presentations.
My own background includes print advertising sales. I became a student of marketing back then, so whenever I met advertising professionals I picked their brains. I remain a student of marketing and note the good and the bad in real estate presentations. Here are the major and most common mistakes.
Email Subject Line: Studies show you have just moments to entice the recipient to open, not hit Delete. The Subject Line is the most important part of your email. If prospects don’t open it they will not see your property. When I see something like “Investment offering,” I reluctantly open it because I am in the business; but prospective buyers usually hit Delete. The Subject must be brief and specific about what’s inside.
Headline: No buyer will ever buy a 0000 S. Main St., but they might buy a small office building, on a large corner lot, with plenty of parking, directly across the street from the University of Michigan football stadium press box. For this listing I would use a simple Office Building Opposite UM Football Stadium. Not flowery – but that’s not the place to be flowery. I cringe when I see an address used for a headline.
Location: I have seen presentations of great properties “in Orange Township,” or “Near the popular Smith Park.” The broker may know where Orange Township is, or Smith Park, but I sure don’t. The first order of business is to give the location – logically. For a property that may be used by a foreign corporation I start with a map of the United States, then the region, state, and right down to the sight itself. If the property appeals to a local buyer I will forgo the bigger picture. A buyer loses interest fast if they have “Where is this property?” nagging at them.
Price: Studies show that real estate ads with prices draw 42% more calls, yet a remarkable number of presentations have no price. When there is no price I think either, “Sloppy broker – all information suspect,” or, “They’re afraid they’ll scare me off.” When I see “Contact broker for price and cap rate,” I read, “I must explain why the list price is too high.”
Auctions: When a property is put up for auction a buyer must have time for due diligence up front, because auction sales are final. If the auctioneer really intends for other brokers to present the property to their prospects they must have time to study it before taking it to their prospects. Yet, auctioneers have told me that 2-3 weeks notice is the standard of the industry, and daily I receive advertisements with a mere 10-14 days notice of the upcoming auction. Sperry Van Ness has a division that knows how to conduct a real estate auction.
Why: There are times when it is helpful to tell why a property is on the market; Owner Retiring, Bank Ordered Sale, To Settle Estate. If it is relevant to explain why such a good property is on the market, or why it is underpriced, the broker should use it in the marketing.
The Internet: There are many places on the Internet to market a listing and too many brokers use just one or two.
Commission Splitting: Why should the seller care? That requires an entire column. The answer will be given next week
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